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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Slyest of winks with spinning hair The sound of light follow after I am left in silent ink Tapioca is all I have left to remind me Of the mind we once shared Now her visiting hour is over And I am left drooling for more My pudding slips to the floor My life just walked out the door Alicat As I sit here dimly thinking Watching modem lights a-blinking Churning out poetic hash. Lord, in all Your piety, Help me keep my sanity: Please don't let the modem crash! --Alicat |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another sad one. 'My life just walked out the door'...so touching. That one line says it all. Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow! Vivid! You don't post often enough sir! I like this!  |
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blueyz75 Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 138IL |
Just sittin here thinking, maybe if the man wasn't just laying there drolling he could get up and go after the girl! Don't we learn love is worth fighthing for?  Kelly I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh no you didn't ! We pulled ya right back ! It's happy hour ! I knew there was more from you out here....he he he gonna bring it all back up  |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Sad. And, Blueyz is right - when will we learn that love is a gift worth fighting for? I have enjoyed all your poems and look forward to more. |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Ali- "My life just walked out the door"....what a heartfelt statement. Don't let that life go without trying to get it back, she sounds worth it to you. Keep posting, your work is great. Sheila |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Sad piece, but nonetheless beautifully written...I'm glad Munda is bringing up all of these from the archives! Hope to see more new ones, though!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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