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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Like a mountain, we began Seeking our lovers crest Yes there were valleys too But we rose to meet each test Without you life was a desert My soul was dry and forlorn I sought a mountain stream Hoping our love would be reborn Then we found our hearts In the forest of despair Lovers lost in lies We stumbled without care The horizon now before us Yours east, mine is west We part our landscapes here We’ve failed the lover’s test. |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
PdV, A little sad, but beautiful. ~Gene |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Very very nice I can relate ... why is so easy to fall in love but so hard to say goodbye ? Good job  ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
deVine, this is beautiful ! This poem speaks of hope, strugle and acceptance. And you moulded it into this beautiful poem with deVine words. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Aaah Sharon...all this evokes from me right now, is a big sigh....very beautiful to say the very least. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Beautifully written, great symbolism. Sad. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow, PdV, this is even better than usual...but of course, all your poems are great!  Kinda sad, yeah, but it's still great... Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad yet beautifully done, Sharon! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
What a tender, touching work! Well done! Dennis :^) |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Elegance and sadness . Eloquently stated. |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Hhhhhhmmmmm.......PdV, I have to ask.....have we been living the same life in a parallel universe??!! It would appear so. Nicely written, although I know the inspiration was painful if this is drawn from personal experience. "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind words. I live in an 'alone'ness....not lonely all the time but alone most of the time..even in a crowd of friends I stand apart.... |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
PdV- This is so sad, but beautiful feeling behind it and superbly written. Sheila |
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