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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
My Secret Crying inside But you will never know So easy to fall So damn hard to let go You say you don't want to hurt me Can't we just be friends? Sure, okay give me some time - And when my heart mends... Until then I'll just pretend That everythings okay But excuse me if I am at a loss for words Or don't know what to say I do care about you And want you to be happy So I guess this is the way Things will have to be I'll hold you in my heart And never will let go But that's okay, it's my secret You will never know! ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I don't think there's many things harder than pretending only friendship which one whom you love. You have written well of that dilema. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
I agree with child, you addressed this problem very well, and put it into a beautiful poem! Great job, StarrGazer! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this a lot...as I've done this very thing. Thank you for putting it into words. |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Wonderful poem. Yep, I've also been in the same place for quite a number of years. She was my first real love, so I can never completely let go. ~Gene |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Oh yes, I know exactly how this one feels at this time in my life. It's nice to know I'm not alone *sigh* Thankfully we are still friends but every day I look at him and wonder why he can't love me...... All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem! I'm sure we can all relate to this pain. Denise |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Thanks for all of your kind replys .... guess everything has a reason and friends are better than nothing huh? ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how beautiful...sad but beautiful |
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