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magestic shimmers(haiku)

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

0 posted 2001-05-11 12:05 PM

here's my 2nd attempt at a haiku...

love, chinese gal
michelle

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majestic shimmers

starry studded black velvet

draped over the sky

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-05-11 04:24 PM

Very good, Michelle. I don't do haiku's but I know a good one when I see it. Joyce

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2001-05-13 02:47 AM

Oh, Michelle, this is exquisite haiku! glorious images created! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-13 05:10 PM

Very nicely done!
I did enjoy this one!

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

4 posted 2001-05-15 12:57 PM

Thanks Joyce,ellie and Dopey!
really glad that u liked this!

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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