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DreamChild: The Lover; P.3 |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams ![]() |
You're the sweetest flavor that my heart has ever tasted. Every minute spent with you, not a second of is wasted. Each time I look into the depths of your gorgeous sparkling eyes, the stormy clouds of life pass on and I see endless sunny skies. To feel your arms around me, to have you hold me tight, leaves me longing for your touch again and keeps me up all night. Your cheerful laugh and precious smile warm me to my soul, and as I stare into your face, I almost lose control. Baby, I don't know exactly what you've done to me, But I hope that we're together for all eternity. DEDICATED TO SUE ANN COLLINS ~DreamChild~ [This message has been edited by ~DreamChild~ (edited 05-08-2001).] |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nice poem. Sue Ann should be flattered. Joyce |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ah, to be loved so completely...Beautiful poem. (Thanks for all your lovely replies)....Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Dream Child, This is a beautiful love poem-You express your feelings well. With that said, I think you may have a lot going for you and your Special Heart's Desire! Keep up your pursuit! David No Better Place do I know God Bless us All!!! |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
this series is turning out to be quite excellent. you are truly talented. keep posting these great poems. |
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mistyrose Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75state of anxiety |
oh to be the object of your desire must be quiet flattering if your words reveal your true self still reading.....now for pt. 4 what a gift you have ~dreamchild~ mistyrose~* |
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