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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2001-05-07 02:34 PM


You're the sweetest flavor
that my heart has ever tasted.
Every minute spent with you,
not a second of is wasted.

Each time I look into the depths
of your gorgeous sparkling eyes,
the stormy clouds of life pass on
and I see endless sunny skies.

To feel your arms around me,
to have you hold me tight,
leaves me longing for your touch again
and keeps me up all night.

Your cheerful laugh and precious smile
warm me to my soul,
and as I stare into your face,
I almost lose control.

Baby, I don't know exactly
what you've done to me,
But I hope that we're together
for all eternity.

DEDICATED TO SUE ANN COLLINS
~DreamChild~


[This message has been edited by ~DreamChild~ (edited 05-08-2001).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-05-07 05:35 PM


Nice poem.  Sue Ann should be flattered.  Joyce
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2001-05-07 05:49 PM


Ah, to be loved so completely...Beautiful poem. (Thanks for all your lovely replies)....Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2001-05-07 06:11 PM


Dream Child,
  This is a beautiful love poem-You express your feelings well. With that said, I think you may have a lot going for you and your Special Heart's Desire!
     Keep up your pursuit!
          David
          

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

shadydaze
Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85

4 posted 2001-05-08 03:52 PM


this series is turning out to be quite excellent. you are truly talented. keep posting these great poems.
mistyrose
Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety
5 posted 2001-05-08 04:05 PM


oh to be the object of your desire
must be quiet flattering
if your words reveal your true self

still reading.....now for pt. 4
what a gift you have ~dreamchild~

mistyrose~*

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