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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
There is a stone wall somewhere between love and hate; jump it once or twice. ------------ Depending what side you start out on, "jump it once or twice." Get it? ~Gene |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Gene---thanks.........my problem seems to be that I jump too fast (always with the best of intentions and hopes, mind you). For now, I'll stay hidden behind the wall (I am, however, on the love side--that's why I'm hurting so much). I will keep your advice in mind for when I decide to jump again. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
It wasn't meant for me but - I got it Gene! |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
freckles, yep, I know how you feel. But if you jump real quick to the hate side (just for a second), you'll kill that demon that's holding you back. Just be sure to jump back to the love side. Child, Sure it is...it's meant for everyone. ~Gene |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Gene, I really liked this one. I get screwed up with my jumping. Seems I jump too fast when it should have been slow or jump too slow when it should have been faster. Maybe one day I'll get the pattern right. Sheila |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is great and very well written! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow, talk about a few words packed with meaning...I'm not so sure it's for me either, but it sure is great! Good work, Gene! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Gene this is great! So clever! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i certainly didn't expect this...very refreshingly different and original |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Gene, Yeah, I like this, LOOK BEFORE YOU LEAP! Another thoughtful work! Dennis :^) |
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