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mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

0 posted 2001-04-29 11:34 PM

your eyes tell me
secrets
of your lifetime
dying
sunsets
false
tears
open
windows
with light
breezes
and new loves~
revealed
in silence
feeling
as if
i am the
only one
to know...~*

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

1 posted 2001-04-29 11:59 PM

Very good poem.

I liked it alot.

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty."
coyote

mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

2 posted 2001-04-30 12:17 PM

coyote..thanks so much
this has a very special meaning
to me

mistyrose~*

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2001-04-30 01:33 AM

The ending is quite unique. I enjoyed it.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2001-04-30 02:36 AM

It is nice to be trusted with secrets, even silently. Nice poem. Joyce

mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

5 posted 2001-04-30 01:48 PM

thanks for your nice comments

mistyrose~*

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

6 posted 2001-04-30 03:13 PM

Yes. When you are the one someone trust, hold on to the secrets. Good thoughtful poem.
Melton

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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2001-04-30 07:13 PM

A lovely poem, describing a very special moment.

Betty Lou Hebert

Suzanne Arlene
Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2001-04-30 10:23 PM

Ahhhhhhhhhhh so she looks into his eyes and sees his secrets. Nothing is ever sacred lol great poem

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

9 posted 2001-05-02 11:32 PM

Sounds like a special friendship. Another good read. Enjoyed much.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2001-05-07 12:14 PM

ahhh..how wonderful it must be to be able to feel like that...

i like the concept of communnicating complexity in silence too...enjoyed the read

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

11 posted 2001-05-07 02:16 PM

great poem, great flow. thanks for sharing.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 2001-05-08 02:40 AM

Very Nice indeed!

Maree

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

13 posted 2001-05-08 10:56 PM

I did not have to wait long, and this is a good thing. I really like your style. This conjured a warm and distant memory for me. Thanks.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

14 posted 2001-05-09 06:41 PM

these indeed are the secrets of the heart. . .

you show them well here. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

15 posted 2001-05-09 09:02 PM

Very good poem, I enjoyed this very much!

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