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mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

0 posted 2001-04-24 01:57 AM

i see him
through a window
in a mind
and sometimes it
seems so clear
how easy
it should be
for me to reach
and to love him,
when he's so near
but somehow
through a window,
i know
it couldn't last
as soon as
i received the
strength
to reach
i only,
broke the glass...

Embers_Before_God
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 101
USA

1 posted 2001-04-24 02:32 AM

Wow...I really enjoyed this piece...and may I be the first to welcome you to PIP...Embers

Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2001-04-24 06:40 AM

wow, beautful analogy in this poem! Welcome and keep the beautiful poems coming! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

3 posted 2001-04-24 08:05 AM

Great First Post, Mistyrose!!
Please keep 'em coming.
Welcome to pip.

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty."
coyote

mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

4 posted 2001-04-24 12:16 PM

i am very touched by such positive comments..i wasnt sure what to expect....
thanks so much..you have no idea what this means to me
oh, and thanks for the warm welcome

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2001-04-24 01:10 PM

Welcome Mistyrose and your poem is lovely. Joyce

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

6 posted 2001-04-24 01:21 PM

Thought provoking and well written. Good job, mistyrose. (btw, I like your handle...nice imagery there too.*S*)

twinsgd
Member

since 2000-02-13

Posts 416
Ontario,Canada

7 posted 2001-04-24 11:21 PM

Nice poem Mistyrose and welcome
jack
ps didn't cut your hand i hope

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2001-04-25 01:04 AM

I really like this! Welcome to the site and will be looking for more.

Betty Lou Hebert

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

9 posted 2001-04-25 06:06 AM

Welcome! I see so much here. At least you had to courage to take the first step.
Melton

Wikket
Member

since 2000-01-29

Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA

10 posted 2001-04-25 07:09 PM

Beautiful! You have a wonderful flow to this piece...and the subject matter hits close to home. Well, at least for me it does! Thanks for choosing to share it with all of us here at the Pub! And WELCOME!

~~Jamie

"There are no unlockable doors
There are no one winning the wars
There are no unrightable wrongs or unsinkable songs..." --Ozzy

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

11 posted 2001-04-25 07:31 PM

Yeah welcome with a lovely first post.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

12 posted 2001-04-26 02:01 PM

thanks everyone for your encouragement....*hugs* to each of you
and thanks...mistyrose~*

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

13 posted 2001-05-02 02:45 AM

Oh I really loved this Mistyrose

Has such a great impact. So much said in very few lines.

Loved it!

Welcome!

Maree

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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

14 posted 2001-05-02 02:48 AM

Oh I really loved this Mistyrose

Has such a great impact. So much said in very few lines.

Loved it!

Welcome!

Maree

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-02-2001).]

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

15 posted 2001-05-02 02:32 PM

A belated Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed this....thank you!

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

16 posted 2001-05-02 09:23 PM

Yes, I welcome you to, and I am glad that I didn't miss this, I know I am going to enjoy your poetry.

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

17 posted 2001-05-03 04:24 PM

welcome, mistyrose!

this poem reminds me of something:

from the outside looking in
oh so sweet and lovely
but then its out of reach
surreal yet sad melody

love,michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

18 posted 2004-08-27 04:20 AM

good write!

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