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Red_Feather
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since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

0 posted 2001-03-30 11:00 PM

My poet's voice
has been quiet
for too long
Waiting for life
in an emotive cell
I hum solitude
though it lacks
the love to be song

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

1 posted 2001-03-30 11:05 PM

"Waiting for life
in an emotive cell"

These are good words to start with.
Welcome to the Pub.

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-03-30 11:24 PM

Welcome Red Feather. May this be the corner to stir your muse. Joyce

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

3 posted 2001-03-30 11:48 PM

Welcome to the Pub. This is a very nice first post! I am looking forward to more.

May you find the love to break into song.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

4 posted 2001-03-31 12:05 PM

Thank you all for the welcome.
Marilyn- i am working on it. Thanks.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2001-03-31 12:30 PM

Welcome to Passions Red_Feather! I love your poem! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions!

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

6 posted 2001-03-31 07:50 AM

You voice your thoughts well, it take a real knack to put across emotions in the few words as you have done here.

Welcome and I can't wait to read more of your words.

-wordancer

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

7 posted 2001-03-31 08:11 AM

Your poetic voice is beautifully sung here, continue to sing to us, please...Ellie
...and a hearty welcome to the pub!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Stephanos

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since 2000-07-31

Posts 3618
Statesboro, GA, USA

8 posted 2001-03-31 09:39 AM

Alas, how I have known this feeling!

great poem.

Stephen.

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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-03-31 10:05 AM

Welcome to Passions, don't be silent, I was for 25 years and I write every day!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

10 posted 2001-03-31 11:19 AM

Welecome to Passions. This is such a lovely place. And please do not be silent..Your voice and words are lovely.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2001-04-01 07:18 AM

I hum solitude
though it lacks
the love to be song

beautiful!

Welcome to Passions.

Maree

I may know the word but not say it
I may know the truth but not face it
I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head indifferent.

Natalie Merchant

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 04-01-2001).]

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

12 posted 2001-04-02 10:49 PM

Wow, if you all could see me I'd be blushing, or perhaps i am? Thank you for making me feel welcome and i hope i can write poems that are as well liked as those i read.
Denise.. thank you especially for the card, i very much appreciate the gesture.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

13 posted 2001-04-03 06:49 PM

A fine bit of expression... welcome to the Pub... May solitude find itself wanting.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

14 posted 2001-05-02 03:06 AM

Very well expressed

I enjoyed again
Maree

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kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

15 posted 2001-05-02 11:56 AM

what a wonderful first post! glad to have the opportunity to read this one

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

16 posted 2001-05-03 01:52 AM

You have a lot of talent. Nice to see you posting here. Will look for more!

Betty Lou Hebert

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

17 posted 2001-05-03 06:45 AM

Welcome.
Please share your feelings. Write to us and for yourself.
Melton

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

18 posted 2001-05-04 08:35 AM

hey this is a pretty nice piece, glad that I came in as I like it a lot. and a belate Welcome to passions.

Charisma

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

19 posted 2001-05-05 03:17 PM

great first post.
Welcome to the forums!
looking forward to more great poetry.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

20 posted 2004-08-27 04:21 AM

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