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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-04-23 08:52 PM


I've seen words,
All of my life,
They fly like birds,
With freedom and might,

Describe my home,
And the places I've been,
They are words of poems,
In everything I do they mean,

But some have gone understood,
Words I could not describe,
Not till I was still and stood,
When I thought I had to say goodbye.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2001-05-02 03:02 AM


But some have gone understood,
Words I could not describe,
Not till I was still and stood,
When I thought I had to say goodbye.

I second you on that.
A very sad write

enjoyed reading I did  

what would we do without words!

Maree

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-02-2001).]

Lady In White
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2 posted 2001-05-02 02:33 PM


Oh, never say goodbye!  I liked this...
2dalimit
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3 posted 2001-05-02 10:24 PM


I'm speechless.


Melton

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