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shadydaze
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since 2000-10-02
Posts 85


0 posted 2001-04-23 02:17 PM


when we touch
the impression you make
feels to my heart
indescribable,
unknowable,
like a subliminal spark.
i sense it...
tingling in my flesh...
flowing in
sporatic bursts
of excitement
through my neck,
where the warmth,
where the warmth can be
felt...
pulsing
pumping
pounding your name.
a call...
a plea...
kiss me
hold me
closer
warmer
breathe
feel
touch...


© Copyright 2001 shadydaze - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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Washington State
1 posted 2001-04-23 03:43 PM


What a wonderful feeling.  Joyce
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since 1999-06-11
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2 posted 2001-04-23 08:36 PM


it is very beauiful.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
3 posted 2001-04-25 12:15 PM


mmmmmmm.......erotic touch.
jack

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
4 posted 2001-04-25 06:25 AM


I like it.
Melton

mistyrose
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety
5 posted 2001-04-28 05:21 PM


very very nice

mistyrose~*

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
6 posted 2001-05-01 06:14 AM


Appropriate writting style for this   Well done.
And I really, really like this piece..
"a call...
a plea...
kiss me
hold me
closer
warmer
breathe
feel
touch..."

beautiful shadydaze.. sensuous writing
-Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

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