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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2001-04-12 03:59 PM


When you are needing kind words for my epitaph,
Just say I loved living and enjoyed a good laugh,
And if this is not too presumptuous to be;
Inscribe "The world's better because of me."

By; Joyce 4/12/01

© Copyright 2001 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-12 05:23 PM


It's just the truth Joyce!  The world is a better place and many people will testify to that!

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2001-04-12 10:32 PM


Wow Joyce, i have had to help choose the words for someone else's stone, but i have never given a thought to what someone might choose for me, nor what i would choose myself if the sutituation were such.
Judging by the love with which you write for those that have shared your life, i'm sure you have made the world around you a better place. And that is no small feat.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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3 posted 2001-04-12 11:56 PM


excellent sentiment Joyce. a fitting rhyme to go out on..lol

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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4 posted 2001-04-13 08:26 PM


Of epitaphs and eulogies I am at a loss to comment.
I must say though, that yours is true.  
And if I were to write my own,
I'd have to say this:

"May God have mercy on his soul."

Amen.  

"I hate quotes, they suck!"
I.G. Norance

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5 posted 2001-04-14 06:53 AM


Lovely thoughts here..I guess I'd want mine to say.. She is gone but she left a legacy of love behind!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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6 posted 2001-04-14 12:44 PM


I am sure that statement would be accurate...the world IS a better place because you were in it... )  Very cute poem.....Twilah
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7 posted 2001-04-14 05:57 PM


And a V.I.P. you will have been and may you R.I.P.   Such a nice inscription you have written for yourself befitting the poet you are! I love it!
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8 posted 2001-04-15 07:19 AM


So enjoyed coming across this jewel.  Just yesterday my thoughts were tiptoeing across this same venue, and I came up with...

Did I make your heart full?
Did I leave a smile?
If not call me back,
we'll travel yet another mile.

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9 posted 2001-04-16 02:21 AM


I thought this was great. Very true and something i'd like to use.....i liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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10 posted 2001-04-16 06:09 PM


Everyone would definalty say that about you.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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11 posted 2001-04-21 02:27 AM


The last line in your poem is awesome. Great work.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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