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A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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Missouri
0 posted 2001-04-12 09:26 AM

You're the tic
I'm the toc
Our hands work together
Around the clock

Hours fly by
When I'm with you
Time's ticking music
While I'm loving you
© Copyright 2001 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
shadydaze
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since 2000-10-02
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1 posted 2001-04-12 12:55 PM

excellent!
i enjoyed this poem tremendously.
as far as critique, simplistic perfection!
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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Washington State
2 posted 2001-04-12 03:50 PM

Really cut and well done.  Joyce
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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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Idaho, USA
3 posted 2001-04-12 05:27 PM

Cute poem.  Well done.

Betty Lou Hebert
2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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Mississippi coast
4 posted 2001-04-14 02:22 PM

Being in love- true harmony.
Melton
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