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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME 
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Spring Storm Haiku Snow covers bare ground Burying all thoughts of spring God's April Fool's joke White over colors Crocuses will have to wait For April showers. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
ahhh..another spring day in Maine..gotta love it!  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very good kcs. I'm just beginning to figure out what a haiku is. 5 7 5 right? my april fool cat caught a mouse and let it go up my leg, down back. Joyce |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful Haiku. Geesh..SNOW? I pity your state! LOL! And I thought the on again off again warm weather we've been having here was annoying. At least it isn't snowing...*Jenn says and looks out the window in suspicion*  still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Don't ya hate it when that happens? Thank God it's April and that snow will melt quickly! Beautiful Haiku from a lovely lady...Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Clever and revealing. I'll give Tanka a try. Melton |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Pegasus - You are more than welcome to come up here and enjoy it with us.  I know how boring it must be down there in Florida.Joyce - That is very good! You should post it separately. Jenn - Hope the suspicions were unfounded. Ellie - Sure do hate it, especially since it was a surprise! Melton - I'm looking forward to reading what you come up with. Thank you all for reading. To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Good one, Marilyn. But I'll trade ya the Wyoming wind? "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a fun read. I liked this one a lot. I liked how you said that snow in the spring in God's April fools joke.......Nicely done Marilyn!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Billy - Can I think on that a bit? We do have wind here, too.Javier - Thanks. Actually, I need to give credit for that line to someone who made that comment to me on the way into church yesterday. To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very nice! We had snow here today too and I am trying not to complain, as we do need all the moisture we can get. Our area is abnormally dry this year. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hehe, April fool's joke.. We hardly ever get snow here.. and it's great when we do.. 'coz it's so rare.. sure must be something to see, all the flowers covered in snow.. Damn cold though.. I liked this.. like this a lot. Love + hugz, Lynne |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
Terrific, Marilyn. That is the scene by the entrance to our porch when I was young. Thanks for the rememory. More of a Senyru than a true Haiku or a Haiku/Senyru combo - lol. Glad I cam ein to see this. Panne |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Betty - We are starting to thaw, mud under the snow. Makes a really interesting combination. Lynne - Thanks, especially for the hug. Actually, you can't see the crocuses, because we've had more than a foot of snow in the last four days. I'd be very happy to share. Panne - Thanks. I'm glad it stirred a good memory. Now that you've stopped in, stick around for a bit. To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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