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Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

0 posted 2001-03-27 10:46 PM



Colors swirl amidst the peace
Images float across the breeze
Placid thoughts, as warm as fleece
Float across the open seas.

Fairies fly on wings of change
Dragons watch over their magical land
Angels of the night whisper upon the warming wind
As the night wraps us in her loving hand.

Stars gleam in a sea of velvet
Waves crash against a castle's shore
A sleeping face silently gleams
Caught in a world at the edge of dreams.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


© Copyright 2001 Cassandra Roseen - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2001-03-27 11:53 PM


I love that time at the edge, always hate to wake up from it. What a lovely and comfortable poem this is!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
2 posted 2001-03-27 11:53 PM


very well done indeed!  the imagry is quite vivid and it flows very well.  my compliments.  dreams are so enjoyable arnt they.
Keith

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
3 posted 2001-03-28 12:41 PM


This is quite beautiful.  We need our dreams, both nightand day.  Joyce
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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
4 posted 2001-03-28 12:45 PM


An enchanted poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2001-03-28 06:43 PM


Ilove mystical dreamy world you've created here!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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