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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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The moonlight sifting through the leaves in the apple orchard, weaves, patterns made of dark and light, that decorate the summer night. In the meadows silvered space, Moon-mad horses wheel and race. The lake is like a sheet of glass. Now and then, small ripples pass across it's surface and I know that silver fish must swim below. All night long the spell remains. Night birds sing their sweet refrains. Till finally, with fickle sighs, The wanton moon deserts the skies. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
The average person sees only moonlight. You see all of this. A true poet. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 03-27-2001).] |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
The sun has golden glory bright, So our beloved moon it seems, Silver guardian of the night, Must cast his spells, Across our dreams. Good images, Joyce. Thanks. "The poet is the priest of the invisible." |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
How beautiful....and such imagery. I could envision it in my mind. Some of my favorite images too...very nice.... Gloria |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Such a detailed painting you painted, kind of like You Are There, feeling and experiencing it with you. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You write very visually. I am impressed, because that is not my strong point. It does indeed seem to be a "you are there" experience.  To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thank you all for your nice comments. I'm glad everyone enjoyed the poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
n the meadows silvered space, Moon-mad horses wheel and race............... My favourite image! Love this one too Maree |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Maree: Thank you again for making such nice comments. I have seen horses run madly sometimes on a moonlight night and thought I'd put that in a poem sometime. Betty Lou Hebert |
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