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Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

0 posted 2001-03-27 03:07 PM

The dawn of love, so magical and new,
Two bodies set aflame with burning kiss.
Enchanted world, and only for the two.
No other pair has ever loved like this.
Young love, a wonder while its passions last,
Must change its form if love's to long endure.
Too soon the thrill of love once new, is past.
It should condense to essence now, more pure.
At times love's embers start a blazing flame,
Soon cooling down to just a lovely glow.
No need for these to play a youthful game,
Their dreams fulfilled as both of them now know.
For though the young and foolish long for fire,
The glowing embers, wiser hearts desire.

Joyce 1/16/2000

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2001-03-27 03:24 PM

lovely and so well constructed, Joyce. I am fast becoming an admirer.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Wobbly Head Bob
Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 299
Virginia, USA

2 posted 2001-03-27 05:04 PM

A very mature look at love and lust! I liked the scheme (honestly I'm a huge fan of ryhme and structure) and it conveyed the messaged beautfully...dare I say, poetically. :P Great work!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-03-27 05:08 PM

Thanks to both of you Pegasus and Bob. Your praise is so much appreciated. joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-03-27 06:04 PM

This is great Joyce! I doubt if you'll ever convince the young though, that "fire' is not better. That takes maturity.

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

5 posted 2001-03-27 11:35 PM

Ah, but there's still fire in those embers. It just doesn't consume as quickly.

Another nice read from you.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

6 posted 2001-03-28 08:51 AM

Good read. Love does indeed endure with the right people.
Melton

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

7 posted 2001-03-30 10:36 PM

This is a well written realistic look at romance. If only the young would listen and believe.

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