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A clueless write

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-04-08 03:38 PM

When dropped to the ground,
It is bound to be found,

When in the air,
No one seems to care,

When praise as a thing,
Sadness it brings,

When feared as a rival,
It amplifies its arrival,

When claimed unknown,
Its face is shown,

When you finally begin,
It intently ends.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

laryalee
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 352
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2001-04-09 12:10 PM

I'm afraid it's too late at night for me to ponder the nuances of this.....
'Clueless' you say?
I'm afraid you may have been referring to me, sigh.
I love the last one especially:
"When you finally begin,
It intently ends."
(Sounds like my first marriage, LOL!)

Honestly, I cannot ponder this all night....I will drop in tomorrow and see who has figured this one out....or if you are teasing, being terribly smart - or at least giving another hint?
Lary

painted lady
Junior Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 48
on the wing or nectaring

2 posted 2001-04-09 01:46 AM

X

I have to agree, it's just too late for this puzzle. Later maybe.

pl

And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils. Wm Wordsworth (I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud)

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2001-04-09 04:38 AM

Heh, aah.. well I'm actually not sure of this one myself.. I think I'll do the same, and pop back later.. to see if someone has understood.. or a little hint been given.. *_^ Sorry 'bout that.. I guess we think a bit differently!

Love, Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2001-04-12 03:09 AM

I am sorry for teasing you guys. But none of you have tried to guess what it is.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

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