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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2001-03-17 08:03 AM


Gazing on the hill
where trees were bare all winter
now they are lacy
pregnant with the buds of Spring
soon birth of leafy splendor

She dresses for Spring
her gown of Hyacinth blue
scent of pungent earth
and so Spring begins her Waltz
she dances on our heart strings

© Copyright 2001 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-03-17 08:29 AM


Beautiful, Ellie!
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2 posted 2001-03-17 12:33 PM


Nicely done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2001-03-17 07:55 PM


Oh, wow, Ellie! You do so nicely with tanka! These are really beautiful, and so is the image you present.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

robin-shep
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since 2001-03-18
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4 posted 2001-03-18 09:52 PM


Bravo. Bravo.
C'est formidable,
Incroyable.

Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
5 posted 2001-03-20 10:47 PM



Wow Ellie - so lovely with wonderful imagery and symbolism

Take care,
Melissa~

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