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Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-03-14 07:28 PM


you took it from me
left my unknown self
half here half there
unaware of myself

stole my heart
when i wasn't seeing
ripped from my chest
open and bleeding

left me disoriented
dizzy with desire
Go ahead take it all
come play in the fire

is it what you craved
a token love to view
displaying my weakness
an arrogant coup

I am openly humbled
your confidence succeeded
treat my heart with respect
Was all that i pleaded

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Embers_Before_God
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since 2001-03-06
Posts 101
USA
1 posted 2001-03-15 04:18 AM


i've felt similar to your words...thanks for sharing them...embers
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2 posted 2001-03-16 08:44 PM


Ah I hate it when that happens, nice work tho

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2001-03-17 11:18 AM


Thank you for your responses.Love has a funny way of taking you when you weren't even looking. I guess that has happened to us all.
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