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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Looking out the window at the snow That is so beautifully floating down As a ruptured feather pillow very Quickly covering the ground, I feel his arm around my shoulder.. Feel his warm breath on my cheek; I look into his soft blue eyes, being Spellbound as I hear him speak. His voice so deep and tender now Whispers of his love so true; As he holds me close, I respond Repeating his words..I love you. The snow is quickly deepening now As inside, our love is deepening too, Feeling each others heightening desires. Releasing emotion so long overdue. The fireplace displays its flickering glow As if dancing for our mutual pleasure; We come together in silence now, our Passion mingling with hidden treasure. We love the night away, not wanting To see the dawn of a new day appear; I turn to the one I love, as he gently Kisses my eyelids..holds me ever so near. We whisper about the love we share Each sharing what’s in our heart; The time was approaching, we both knew When we’d say farewell..and depart. But for now, I lie closer to him, Feeling the beating of his heart; Knowing it beats for me alone, Whether near..or miles apart. As we leave our cabin with saddened Hearts, we vow to return one day, Our love demands it of us now.. To be together in every way. |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Well twilah...I think you beat out my 'Morning Light' by a few yards with this masterpiece! Gracious me! Makes me long to be with my fiance again!!! ![]() ~~Jamie ![]() I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Thank you Jamie.....I guess yesterday was "that" sort of day.... ![]() |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yep every little memory is cherished and enjoyed reading this one ![]() Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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A Mused Cupid Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19A comfortable place |
I love this poem, it's so romantic and written so well. Made me dream of being snowed in somewhere with that special someone. ![]() |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Although it doesn't snow here where I am, but I am looking forward to the coming winter months, as I believe couples become closer in winter.All those cuddles on cold nights! A lovely subject to write about. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. JB Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Keep smiling! |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Moondust...A mused Cupid.....JB Thank you so much for your comments..wintery days do have that way of bringing people closer..... ![]() |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
you have warmed a long winter . . . |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
ooooooo...I like it...* grumbles because now he has to take back allhis wishes for spring....* tis a wonderful poem...so clear a picture in the mind..excellent ![]() Sol ![]() ~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~ Author Unknown..well at least to me..:) |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Thank you, krawdad, for your comment..what better way to warm a winter??? ![]() Thank you Sol, for your very complimentary comment....please dont take back your views on Spring.....it is my favorite time of year and I am sure I can find "things" to do then, also...lol Twilah |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Your use of imagery creates a vivid picture. This was awesome! Very tender piece that I enjoyed immensely. <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a very tender piece. I love those big snowstorms that keep everyone in...allowing for peaceful wonderful moments *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Thank you, Whtdove..for your very nice comment....I appreciate your words... Wynter (like that name) yes..seems that when we are boxed in by snow....we can spend more time on other things.... ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Twilah! Lovely! |
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