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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Wrought iron angel the stern rebuking stare keeps the monsters out little children, play with care Carved stone angel in the garden bright guards the flowers, moss, trees little children, stay in sight Stained glass angel leaded panes and paint watcher in the window little children, pray as saints Injected plastic angel sitting on the dash navigating traffic lanes little children, do not crash Cherry wood angel stand on Heaven's stairs morning smile, and goodnight little children, step with care ~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~ Author Unknown..well at least to me..:) |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
"Yea though I walk through the valley of death, I shall fear no evil. For thou art with me..." Kind of reminds me of Psalms a little bit...but an interesting piece, I do say!  Bravo!~~Jamie I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
this was wonderful!! I will deffinately have to save this one,It was very good!!!!!!! I liked the way you mixed the saintly with the pointless...so to speakwell anyhow,i liked it,lol swamp much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Thank you Wikket and Swamp darlin, it was one of those things that just got in my head..and yeas I know..the angel in the dash isn't really arcitecture...but I live in my car *LOL* and so do lots of others..so she got included... have a beautiful day Sol ~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~ Author Unknown..well at least to me..:) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here son! I thought this was great! The title drew me in and the poem really just glowed with talent.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Like the thoughts on diferrent angels, nice. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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A Mused Cupid Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19A comfortable place |
Amazing, truely amazing. I do hope you plan on publishing your poems some day. Those of us who get to read them are blest by how you express the intensity in things that most people just take advantage of. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I like the picture you have developed of things we can relate to in order to watch over our children. Pleasant read. Melton |
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