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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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A new symphony is heard, arising from the depths of time. Times immortal Spring Song. For each new Spring's birth is a wondrous melody anew. New hope dawning, bright horizons. A harmony tween souls and earth. For the deep cold quiet is past, as spring bursts forth her song. Beloved hearts arise and rejoice. Voices of loves harmony in tune, with one song, one soul entwined. as each petal emerges and unfolds, tis a note on the score of life, fufilling our song of hope, that Spring is immortal song, a symphony forever new! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Lovely as always Ellie. the onset of spring seems to bring the best out in people and this shows with the lovely poems about it that everyone is writing.Well done my friend. I guess I'll be writing about winter soon ! Love Jos |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I knew I was going to like this before I started reading it.  I was right. Nice job, my friend. Hope that music starts playing here soon! hugsTo love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Very gracious, Ellie - with a sense of magnificence - your symphony of words makes lovely harmony Lary |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
A lovely spring poem! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ as each petal emerges and unfolds, tis a note on the score of life, fufilling our song of hope, that Spring is immortal song, a symphony forever new! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yes! A very timely poem you write here. It's music to many a weary wintery eye. Hugs, Deb |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
ohh.. how beautiful. The images flashed through my mind with the symphony! "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
You know this years winter has been the longest for me so i'm looking forward to spring and this gave me a little taste, nice work. The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ellie, It's wonderful how spring can fill us fullof new hope and aspirations, a new love of life and sense of adventure. It is wonderful too how you are so skillful is capturing it's escence and in distilling it into such a lovely poem. True Spring lives in your heart, even if it hasn't made it yet to your neighborhood or mine!!!  David No Better Place do I know Than where Hearts knit as one, For in that grand experience, The Better ALL become. God Bless us All!!! |
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A Mused Cupid Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19A comfortable place |
The winter snows melt with the warm breath of your melody with words. Can mother nature fail to dance to this poem as it shines rays of springs enlightenment upon us all. Enjoyed every line you wrote here and I pray Spring has finally sprung for you. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
well done!!! Quite the beautiful poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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