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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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0 posted 2001-02-26 07:24 AM


To share a life,
and love another,
I must first love me.

To feel as one..
and at home with another,
I must feel at home
and at peace with me.

Otherwise, I'm only in need,
and neediness is not love.

If I love who I am,
then there is...
"wanting" to love another.

A healthy relationship...
is sharing our lives,
sharing who we are.

A blending of hearts,
a communion of souls,
a partnership made in heaven!


A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.




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kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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1 posted 2001-02-26 07:51 AM


You have spoken wisely, my friend, and I wish that communion of souls for you more than you can know. I liked this. Why wouldn't I? You write from your beautiful heart.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

BloomingRose
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2 posted 2001-02-26 09:11 AM


ellie this speaks to my heart in many ways. Much wisdom in your words, and so much truth to what you say.
Hugs,
Deb

Wobbly Head Bob
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3 posted 2001-02-26 12:26 PM


Wonderfully written point of heart...love thy self! I read lots of poems here and I make it a point to remember to come back and read a few again...this will be one of those!
jbaker
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4 posted 2001-02-26 07:21 PM


Beautiful, Ellie....and how true your words yet again.
Jos

Denise
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5 posted 2001-02-26 08:52 PM


Very beautiful, Ellie! So true, so true!
Songbird
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Missouri
6 posted 2001-02-27 12:47 PM


Otherwise, I'm only in need,
and neediness is not love. Such a profound statement.. a way too many relationships and marriages start out. Like the saying goes hindsight is always better than forsight.. Unfortunaly many have never felt loved enough to feel their own worth. God bless you.

Dark Angel
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7 posted 2001-02-27 04:55 AM


Straight to the point and SO very true.

I love it.

Maree

Lady Lost
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8 posted 2001-02-27 06:29 AM


Mom this is beautiful and so true. I hope one day I have all the wisdom you do....I love you,

....beth

twilah
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since 2000-09-25
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9 posted 2001-02-27 07:17 AM


Ellie, this was definitely written from your heart. How important it is to love ourselves in order to have the ability to love others. Your family is indeed blessed...by your wisdom.....Twilah..
Zinsser
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Calif.
10 posted 2001-02-27 10:19 PM


Very nice and very true....
Thanks for sharing

ocean
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11 posted 2001-03-03 02:27 AM


Very Beautiful Poem indeed..
If I may comment to 'songbird', it is impossible for another person to give us our own self worth, based on their love for us, or lack thereof.. since it's from the self that all love is understood, and created.
I have heard that phrase before, and it doesn't fit the equation in my judgement..
I don't mean to critique, just my humble opinion..
Thank You..


Moon Dust
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12 posted 2001-03-04 08:34 PM


Wow, thats love alright, like what you've done here. Very nice

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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