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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
A Sicilian Quintain As the silk card arrived and she saw the rose, A smile slowly appeared upon her face; His secret message of love, that only she knows Within the card so delicately edged with lace, Connecting her heart to his, their love continually grows. ******** The silk post cards were sent by serviceman in WW1 to their wives and sweethearts. Because of censureship, letters arrived much disfigured. The silk postcard was sent instead..with an embroidered emblem that was known only to the person sending it and his loved one. [This message has been edited by twilah (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Oh...how I love these poems of true love. My parents were married for almost 55 years and they were so in love with each other every single day. This is so rare these days.Your poem to me, shows that love goes on.A simple gesture like a card means so much. Thanks fo sharing this. JB |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
JB...a silk card was sent to me from someone in England that collects them. Mine has a red rose and leaves embroidered on it. A flap edged in silk and a little card inside the pocket. Very romantic. Thank you for your comment......Gloria |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is really well done twilah (like the name btw). I hope I see more like this. **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Thanks, little girl...this one is special to me, also. The name is American indian...I also use it as a penname on my book....thanks again..Twilah |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Twilah, this is so beautiful. What a nice way to share an old custom, and what a romantic one it was! You're one good poet lady. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautifully written and sooo romantic! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Thank you, Marilyn...for your comment..coming from you, I really appreciate it... ) Ellie, I thank you also....I thought this story was so romantic also..and the card I have is very special to me..... ) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very Beautiful Twilah Loved the flow I enjoyed it very much Maree |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
How romantic and beautiful! Deb |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Thank you, Maree, for your comment...this poem was inspired by a silk card that I received.... ) Deb...I found the story behind the silk card very romantic,thus the poem..... Like your user name..... Twilah |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Ooohhh. This is beautiful. Simply beautiful. Wow! Alicia |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Thank you, Alicia....I appreciate your comment.... ) |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most lovely read, and something I had not heard of before...thank you for sharing... |
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twilah Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 91Maine, USA |
Thank you, Sunshine, I hadn't either until I received the silk post card with the explanation....very romantic... ) |
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