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a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

0 posted 2001-02-23 10:22 PM

I haven't posted at Passions for a while so this is going to be my lil comeback...

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Why did you leave me?
Why did you go?
Why did you have to leave,
to go beyond?

I needed you to light my life,
I needed you to ease my pain,
I needed you to be my shelter,
when cold and in the rain.

I loved you more than I could tell,
yet mere words cannot express.
What I felt when I looked at you,
full of tenderness.

I loved more than time could see,
yet it was seconds that he took from me,
to cause this pain, my heart's agony,
and grief; I cannot without be.

Why did He have to take you?
Why so young, so soon?
Why did He have to make,
my aged heart blue?

I shiver in this cold,
in this loneliness,
without you...

**No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.**
~a_little_girl

[This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 02-23-2001).]

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

1 posted 2001-02-23 11:04 PM

This is sad, and I am sorry if you have lost someone dear to your heart. It's very difficult to lose someone you love.
God understands pain and gathers each tear in a bottle.
Hugs,
Deb

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

2 posted 2001-02-24 12:00 PM

Those are tough questions you are asking. Sometimes it's very hard to see the reason for things, especially when they are painful for us. Writing helps, and time helps, too. Hope you feel better soon. Hugs

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

twilah
Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 91
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-02-24 11:43 AM

This certainly reveals your hurt and pain. Good that you can find a release through poetry. Time will help heal your loneliness
and grief. May God bless....

Gloria

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

4 posted 2001-02-24 01:05 PM

I hope your heart starts to heal. What sad and lonely words you've painted.

Joy

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

5 posted 2001-02-25 06:35 AM

I know this pain you write so eloquently of...it is a part of being alive and it will serve you as that which will give you more compassion and understanding and will pass in time. (((((hugs)))))

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

jbaker
Member

since 2001-02-16

Posts 74
Australia

6 posted 2001-02-25 06:40 AM

It is so sad when we lose a dear one.But as the saying goes..'life goes on'. At least we have the memories to get us through. This is a special poem.
JB

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

7 posted 2001-02-25 05:00 PM

Im sorry.. this sounds like a sad situation. thank you for the read, and i hope things look brighter for you.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

8 posted 2001-02-25 05:55 PM

Everyone, thank you for your replies. I wrote this when I was on a depressed mood, but now I'm feeling a little better thanks.

**No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.**
~a_little_girl

[This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 02-25-2001).]

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