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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-02-22 10:24 PM



Chocolate Cake And Little Fairies
~*~
Enchanting fairies giggle
as they slice the midnight sky
creamy moonlight drips from chocolate cake,
as they dip and swirl in starburst sprinkles
silver fairy wings flutter,
blowing out the candles
in a breeze,
birthday wishes do come true

BloomingRose


[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 02-22-2001).]

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Yu Lan
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1 posted 2001-02-22 10:46 PM


Oh, this is so sweet.. it reminds me of all my birthdays when I was at kindergarten, and I'd make a wish before blowing out my candles.. and have to blow them out several time's cuz mum had used re-lighting ones.. and I'm so pleased to hear that the wishes do come true.. ^_^ This is lovely Deb.. really lovely.



Luv,
Lynne

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kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2001-02-23 12:41 PM


Sounds like a perfect combination to me. Fairies and chocolate - what could be better?

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

jbaker
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3 posted 2001-02-23 07:16 AM


Very nice and such a yummy subject too.
JB

BSC
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4 posted 2001-02-23 08:56 AM


What a beautiful image this brought to mind Deb ~ a simply "delicious" piece. Bonnie
Songbird
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5 posted 2001-02-23 12:50 PM


Love it! Very original.. Brings back feelings of birthdays and my favorite Chocolate cake!!
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6 posted 2001-02-23 03:45 PM


mmm sounds good

~Maria~


BloomingRose
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7 posted 2001-02-23 05:45 PM


Yu Lan~ Glad this brought back good memories for you. Now about those darn candles that won't blow out...
Thanks for reading.

Kcs~ When fairies get involved it surely must taste yummy! Thanks

JB~ seems to have stirred your hunger a bit...

Bonnie~ Thank you, I am glad you found this tasty! I am on a diet, can you tell????

Songbird~ So glad this brought back good memories for you

Moon Dust~ Me too


Denise
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8 posted 2001-02-23 10:10 PM


This is delightful, Deb!
JOY 14
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9 posted 2001-02-24 01:12 PM


Wonderful. This should be on a child's birthday card.

Joy

BloomingRose
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10 posted 2001-02-24 06:31 PM


Denise~ Thank you, so glad you enjoyed reading this

Joy~ Thank you so much! It's very sweet of you to say.



laryalee
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11 posted 2001-02-24 07:12 PM


Wow, Deb - what a delightful take - I mean cake! I shall look out tonight and see if I can spot them *g*...or do they only appear on our birthday?
This is so adorable....you should find a picture for it - it would make a great birthday card!
Lary

a_little_girl
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12 posted 2001-02-25 05:40 PM


Wow! I like the fancys that are intricately woven with the b-day.

**No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.**
~a_little_girl



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