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Lady Lost
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0 posted 2001-02-20 05:32 PM


The scent of red roses permeate the air
She lets this escape become reality
She closes her eyes tightly
Becoming lost in her garden’s mystery

Forgetting for just a moment
All her painfully memories
She watches her garden blossom
As she inhales all of it’s beauty

As her flowers lean toward the sun
Butterfly's begin to dance perfectly
Dancing around to the Silence
…Her favorite symphony


"I mean that loving you is strange and adored by me throughout..oh no it's you again, blessing you with every kiss..."


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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2001-02-20 05:37 PM


lovely piece..but silence all the time isn't healthy..so..I'll SHOUT this BRAVO!!!...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2001-02-20 05:50 PM


Ah, Bethy; Thank you for this! It is exquisitely beautiful and so are you! Love, Mom

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Denise
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3 posted 2001-02-20 09:27 PM


Very beautiful, Beth! Lovely!
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2001-02-20 10:52 PM


I can't think of any words but beautiful for this. Maybe if I say it in other languages? Bellisima, muy hermosa, tres tres jolie. It all means the same thing.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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Florida
5 posted 2001-02-21 09:21 AM



The scent of red roses permeate the air
She lets this escape become reality
She closes her eyes tightly
Becoming lost in her garden’s mystery
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Simply... lovely.
Deb

Darkened Treasures
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since 2000-07-19
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nj
6 posted 2001-02-24 04:06 PM


It has been many a day since last our paths have crossed. So I decided to look for you at our old hideout, and alas, I found you, and the thoughts strung into words so eloquently, that once again I am reminded of what, first, I found fondest of!
jbaker
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since 2001-02-16
Posts 74
Australia
7 posted 2001-02-25 05:10 PM


So beautiful....took my breath away.You have a wonderful way with words. I commend you!

JB


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