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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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To Be Loved Awakened gently. lovingly she quietly calls my name. I feel her body snuggle closer then her fingers on my arm. Her scent is upon my pillow she whispers in the dark. This unique creature I love her warmth completes my existence. Everything to my simple self she cooks for me, sews, cleans... For love she does these chores she even fixes my motorcycle. When I am cold at night she covers my body with blankets. When I am hot with passion she covers my body with kisses. As I sleep the sleep of contentment she is next to me like a comforter. I reach out whenever I awaken touch her warmth, and know I am loved. the artist foremeerly known as bleeding |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Tramp Poet: Such a great description of love...I can only hope I can achieve the quiet contentment you describe in your poem here.  Great one! *CLAP CLAP* ~~Jamie I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
*sigh* This is beautiful, wonderful, marvelous, sweet and tender. Probably a few other things, too, but I don't want to write all day. I like. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a wonderful piece..bravo!! the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Oh Dear Brother 'o' mine!! How sweet this is. I love the feel of this so much and WW is so blessed in your love for her and vicey versy. So very sweet. Love ya...Sis How can you save me? When the dark comes right in and takes me, from my front walk and into bed, where it kisses my face and eats my head. Shivaree |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
he who once was "bleeding" is now blushing... than you each for the wonderfull imput! GREATLY APPRECIATED! bt the way... everyone wanted to know when "Alpha Dawg" the CD was done...it tis! Available at http://tramppoet.homepage.com love ya, the artist foremeerly known as bleeding |
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