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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I wrote this for my friend, Toni, who is from this lovely place. She gave me photos and requested a poem. I am mountain and valley, I am ancient of years, and as young as springtime. My ruins of ancient days, where trodden stony stairs of those long gone have tred. Ruins that gaze from on high, to verdent valley, green below. My children come home to me, from far across the sea, to be enfolded in family arms and renew their heritage here. I am a precious ancient gem in the crown of Italy. A fountain flows with life to honor those who died. Come walk these olden paths, and gaze on high of ruins old. Feast on old world recipes. Be filled with love of family. Rest at evening sun that sets, be young again at dawn. For I, Gessopalena, am beauty beyond compare. The Queen of Italy! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Oh, Ellie..this is grand. so elegant, so "Old world" in it's flavor. you have wrought a precious gem here.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
This was cool,you gave it a real feeling of antiquity,even the wording reminded me of something in the pastthe old ways,this was great!! sam Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Dear Ellie, You have really shown some amazing depth in your writting as you have taken this theme not from personal experience but from pictures and the descriptions by a friend, and have made it so compelling and real to us. I am amazed and delighted. And I am sure your friend will be thrilled with this precious piece--and treasure it for many years to come. David No Better Place do I know Than where Hearts knit as one, For in that grand experience, The Better ALL become. God Bless us All!!! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Beautiful, Ellie. I echo those who have got here before me. Not only have you written a lovely description of your friend's home, but you have done it with words that create an atmosphere of an ancient place in the Old World. What a loving and lovely gift for your friend. Brava! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
So grand Ellie! Makes me want to visit! Great use of imagery...I love it! I'll bet your friend did too! ~~Jamie :- I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
And I got to hear you read it!!! This is truly breathtaking, Ellie!!! Your friend and her relatives will adore it!!! |
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