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Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

0 posted 2001-02-13 12:05 PM

I went out walking,
one grey stormy day,
and I saw you walking too,
but the opposite way.

So I crossed the street,
and I gave you my name
your face lit up bright and clear,
and I've never been the same.

You said that you'd been looking,
for the right kind of man,
one who likes long rainy walks
then you reached for my hand.

Well you must be,
the greatest one I've seen
There's noone else like you
and all my heart feels is you,.... right now (x3)

The day passed by quickly
still rainy and grey
we sat in a diner drinking coffee
talked the night away.

Then the diner was closing
and we walked inthe rain
I walked you all the way home
and though I wanted to stay

I turned round and went home
I live the opposite way
as puddles I splashed with my feet
I heard you calling my name

The months passed by quickly
the seasons and days
I asked, and you gave your hand
and we planned right away.

The old church bells ringing
on our wedding day,
we walked down a garden path
thouh it was stormy and grey

I looked in your eyes
and brushed your tears away
we exchanged vows and rings
and then I heard you say

~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~

Author Unknown..well at least to me..:)

Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

1 posted 2001-02-13 12:49 PM

Another wonderful post. You have quite a talent for this.
Keith

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

2 posted 2001-02-13 08:23 AM

nice piece, Solstice Son....reminds me of the musical, "Singing in the Rain"...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

bestgirl911
Senior Member

since 2000-10-04

Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

3 posted 2001-02-13 10:05 AM

Sol...

Three....wow, what a treat...This is just lovely....

Best

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

4 posted 2001-02-13 11:20 PM

Nice one, Sol, sweet and romantic. Three contrasting pieces today, but all tied together somehow, makes for some good reading. Thanks.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

5 posted 2001-02-15 12:39 PM

I am so totally amazed by your talent as a poet. You never cease to make me wonder where all your inspiration is coming from. So come on, fess up... Where do you get it?

This is so sweet and romantic, as all your poems are. And that pic, ooh, boy!

Great read, SOL!
Alicia

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