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mere enigma
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since 2001-01-29
Posts 18


0 posted 2001-02-11 03:53 AM


That moment was the turning point in my life.  Suddenly my mind was made up and my path was set.  I was leaving him.  I may suffer, but I would never look back. He had spewed hateful words at me before, but these threatened my existence.  These pushed me to the very bottom of inhumanity and despair and self pity.  He wanted to break me down and isolate me so that he would be the only person in my life I could turn to.  Hold me an emotional hostage.  Since he wouldn't let me leave him, I decided to steal myself and my life back.  I was going to escape.

Would you read a novel that began this way?

mere

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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2001-02-11 09:39 AM


In a heartbeat,,,,sounds like my life story..need a co-writer?   Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
2 posted 2001-02-11 08:22 PM


It sounds like a promising start...more?

WO

mere enigma
Junior Member
since 2001-01-29
Posts 18

3 posted 2001-02-12 05:25 AM


Should i continue?  I actually meant to post this in the prose forum, but since it ended up here, oh well...

Mere

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
4 posted 2001-02-12 03:08 PM


mere...

By all means, continue please....we will be  waiting....

Best

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