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mere enigma Junior Member
since 2001-01-29
Posts 18 |
That moment was the turning point in my life. Suddenly my mind was made up and my path was set. I was leaving him. I may suffer, but I would never look back. He had spewed hateful words at me before, but these threatened my existence. These pushed me to the very bottom of inhumanity and despair and self pity. He wanted to break me down and isolate me so that he would be the only person in my life I could turn to. Hold me an emotional hostage. Since he wouldn't let me leave him, I decided to steal myself and my life back. I was going to escape. Would you read a novel that began this way? mere |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
In a heartbeat,,,,sounds like my life story..need a co-writer? Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
It sounds like a promising start...more? WO |
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mere enigma Junior Member
since 2001-01-29
Posts 18 |
Should i continue? I actually meant to post this in the prose forum, but since it ended up here, oh well... Mere |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
mere... By all means, continue please....we will be waiting.... Best |
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