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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Behind them I see your world Colors painted randomly Across the dim black sky Shape domensions into galaxies Before time was a substance And definition yet defined The suburbs of California Dust, six trillion years behind You see What I'm getting at tomorrow Won't come till yesterday The past lies dead behind me I'll walk on anyway A thought as empty as my glass But spat across your screen You know all matter has its mass But niether's ever as it seems Still closed and open onto light Darkness falls come on delight |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Nice, Bob. To tell the truth, I'm not sure I understand this, but it falls nicely on the ears. I like it when you write in this flowing style. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Understanding is unimportant, that you've found the rhythm means you've done what I'd hoped you would! Thanks for the kind words. PS when you close your eyes you can see and do most anything you want. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
the rhythm is divine, this I could definetly dance to! Great job, Bob...  A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
This is cool, Bob - you give a glimpse of immense horizons of thought...then condense them back to realistic size... Enjoyed it! Lary |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
"what I'm getting at tomorrow won't come till yesterday The past lies dead behind me I'll walk on anyway" I LOVED that part! A nice one for a foggy morning here in Indy. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I agree with d k . .....What I'm getting at tomorrow Won't come till yesterday The past lies dead behind me I'll walk on anyway.... Deep. Moving. Thoughtful. Melton |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely written here! i liked thisone tons!!!! Yet another masterpiece!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
the rhythm is great..reminds me of a maze..a struggle to gain enlightenment.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
'What I'm getting at tomorrow Won't come till yesterday The past lies dead behind me I'll walk on anyway' Loved this and the rhythm too  ~Maria~ |
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