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Wobbly Head Bob
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0 posted 2001-02-10 01:23 AM


What I brought upon myself
stares I cannot see
and so what if I'm blind

Valleys only dream for me
The truth as I can see
but so what if I lied

You were gone too
I don't know this
and still so what I if I do

I could've left
And forgotten all about you
You were here and would not stay
While I will remain
come on so what if I'm stupid

© Copyright 2001 Wobbly Head Bob - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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1 posted 2001-02-10 02:37 AM


interesting idea. so what. forget all that and like me anyway.   Sounds like the fellow in the piece has some problems not the least of which is insensitivity. good read, Bob.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Wobbly Head Bob
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2 posted 2001-02-10 03:07 AM


Heart break has a second side, eh? *S*
ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2001-02-10 08:11 AM


This was too close to home for me....good read..

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

kcsgrandma
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4 posted 2001-02-10 11:11 AM


This kind of reminds me of my ex-husband.     Seriously, I think many people who back away from relationships adopt this kind of "so what" attitude in self-defense.  And maybe it is a way of detaching the other person, too, adopting an unlovable stance.  Darn, you people are making me think in here!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

DawnG
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5 posted 2001-02-10 02:34 PM


Everyone adopts this so what attitude once in a while. I know for me I have to try at least to adopt it every day of my life just to survive. I'm not always so successful though. Good read that also hit close to home.

                      Dawn

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6 posted 2001-02-10 03:38 PM


Believe it or not........I am a fan of your writing. Very nicely done again......more!!!!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Wobbly Head Bob
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7 posted 2001-02-10 08:06 PM


Thanks people for reading and replying.  Its good now and then to shrug your shoulders, look up and say, So what?!

Holy *&$^ I have a fan!  *LOL*

Romy
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8 posted 2001-02-12 08:30 AM


No, you have two fans!  Great Job!
nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2001-02-12 05:36 PM


hmmmm...stupid? I think not
~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Wobbly Head Bob
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10 posted 2001-02-12 08:02 PM


Thanks again for the praise and kind words!

Two fans...Thats a very solid base!  *lol*

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