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Passive Valley Sunset

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2001-02-08 07:54 PM

Passive Valley Sunset
by Joy

Passive valley sunset
Doesn’t care who points
Or stares
Passive desert sun sinks
Behind the cactus sand
The car rolls on through Santa Fe
My head rests on the gray upholstry
I stare as nature’s end of day moment melts away
Passive valley sunset makes me feel all right
It doesn’t even know my name
Or how I’ll remember its beauty
As I get rocked to sleep by the bumpy road tonight

Our doubts are traitors,
And make us loose the good we oft might win
By fearing to attempt.
~Shakespeare

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2001-02-08 08:42 PM

very nice images here..well done

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

2 posted 2001-02-08 11:11 PM

Wish I knew how to use imagery as well as you do. Great job here.

Dawn

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

3 posted 2001-02-09 11:02 AM

Thanks Dawn and Pegasus.

Joy

Our doubts are traitors,
And make us loose the good we oft might win
By fearing to attempt.
~Shakespeare

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