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Celebrating Patterns (a rhythmic romp!)
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
(I had such fun with this - in fact the most fun I've ever had with a poem!) Celebrating Patterns! Patterns congregate around us, sleep within us and astound us - large as life or insignificantly small. Patterns darting through the heavens, moleculing through the oceans, painting pitter-patter flecks upon our wall. Patterns dripping, patterns flowing, some with tentative tip-toeing through reflections of a modernistic style. Patterns pensive, others bouncing, with a saucy trim of flounce in every marching meter's regimented mile. Patterns begging, patterns gloating, some with triple-layered coatings - ostentation hiding superficial pride. Patterns planned or tossed at random with their dignity abandoned and the weight of inhibitions kicked aside. Patterns boldly over-rated, others deftly understated, patterns twisted into convoluted lines. Patterns patented and stolen, some disguised and never known. Patterns rolling off the edges of our minds.... |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
patterns bold before my eyes patterns devious with lies patterns soft as kitten's hair patterns that aren't really there drifting shifting patterns cool patterns that I learned in school patterns patterns everywhere even patterns in my hair see what you started? this is another of your wonderful talented concoctions..I really admire your style. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Pegasus, Yo! Oh no, look what you did..."patterns in my hair...." Patterns falling out and flaking, when you're sleeping or awaking, patterns rumpled in the pillow on your bed. Patterns dusting morning windows so you cannot see the light, though you can pinch yourself and know that you're not dead. Yep, this is fun! Lary |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
LOL Patterns in the Pub Bounce through my mind late at night Making my head spin. It's too late at night/early in the morning to respond in kind, but enjoyed this.  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
patterns in the daylight breaking patterns in the bread that's baking on weavers loom the patterns come to life patterns in the rocker rocking subtle patterns interlocking patterns in two boxers dance of strife lovely patterns in a cloud patterns in a field that's plowed patterns in the way you kiss your wife the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Laryalee.... I enjoyed this tremendously.....Great Work! Best |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Good grief, girl you put be in a silly mood, and so from my pen I'm whirling Rotating patterns Make me dizzy Colliding patterns Create kinematic Kaleidoscopes That could hurl Me past the gravitational pull Sending me further Than man or woman Ever dared to go! |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
this was cool, i really liked it,but won't even try to reply with verse. Very interesting,you mentioned some things i'd never thought of before... swamp Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Never thought of patterns in the ways you've described. My fav. lines.. "Patterns darting through the heavens, moleculing through the oceans, painting pitter-patter flecks upon our wall." "pitter-patter flecks"...I just love that! Joy Our doubts are traitors, And make us loose the good we oft might win By fearing to attempt. ~Shakespeare |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Now that was something that was sure interesting to read. Suzanne |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
...it is all most delightful! WO |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
patterns of the mind ever changing state of flux unpredictable the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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