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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa 
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Darkness within the depths of my soul. No light reaching my private hell. I saw you there behind the mask, fear and loathing showing thru. You despise me for what I am, You treat me as if I didn't exist. Your words so cruel to my fragile heart, no longer will my world blow apart. You laughed as my soul burned away, the day I died you came to play. Play your game with my life no more. I am left standing outside the door. Don't you see I once loved you, but fame and fortune have made you become someone you are not. someone that I don't even care to know. so leave now and don't come back. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
to some, the grass always looks greener somewhere else. these people are usually poor judges of character because they are so deeply imbedded within themselves that they don't take time to really see the quality in others. a very thought provoking piece..nicely done. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
epoet... I agree with Pegasus...some people think that things are always better elsewhere, I think they just don't appreciate what's right in front of them. Great Job! Best BTW...I am from MI too...  [This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 02-07-2001).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Ultimately, it comes down to being happy with how you see yourself, and not worrying about what others see.  It's not so easy though, is it?To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Ah, a heart breaking read...amazing how some people that hold our hearts in our hands, deliberately throw them down and walk on them. A good written sorrow. |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
a great piece fitting of true emotion..thanks for the read lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
Thank you one and all. I just thought I would checkout the replies that have been posted. I'm glad that so many of you liked this. any suggestions on possible improvements? P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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