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Mr. Nice112
Junior Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 26


0 posted 2001-02-03 02:20 AM


wHAT IF WE TOOK A HIKE TO STAR FALL'S AND SAT ON A LEDGE,
nOW WOULDN'T THAT BE CONSIDERED LIVING LIFE ON THE EDGE,
aS WE SIT THERE AND BREATH IN THE COLD CRISP AIR,
i TURN TO YOU AND PULL BACK YOUR LONG BEAUTIFUL BLONDE HAIR,
i STARE INTO YOUR EYES AND I SEE A HORMONAL PASSION BURNING FOR ME,
yOU HOLD BACK THAT PASSIONATE URGE AND SAY YOU WANT HERBAL TEA,
aS WE HOLD THE HOT STEAMY CUPS,
i ASK YOU QUESTIONS ABOUT US AND IN RESPONSE YOU ONLY SAY YUP'S,
i WANTED TO GET OFF THE SUBJECT,
sO I LOOKED TO MY LEFT AND ASKED IF YOU HAD DONE YOUR MATH PROJECT,
yOU STARED AT ME WITH A MYSTERIOUS LOOK ON YOUR FACE,
tHAT'S WHEN I KNEW THAT THIS WAS THE TIME AND THE PLACE,
aS I GRAB YOUR WARM CLAMMY HAND,
i TWIRL YOU AROUND JUST LIKE IN THE BERRY SWITZER BAND,
i HELD YOU IN MY ARMS AND WE WATCHED TWO PASSIONATE DEER,
i KISSED YOU ON THE TOP OF YOUR HEAD TO ACT SINCERE,
yOU LOOK UP AT ME WITH A COURIOUS GRIN,
i PUT MY ICY COLD LIPS ON YOUR WARM GENTLE LIPS AND START TO BEGIN,
wE BECOME MORE AND MORE INTAMENT WITH ONE ANOTHER,
i START TO GET THE BG'S AND I FELT LIKE I WAS IN A STATE OF SMOTHER,
yOU ALL OF A SUDDEN PULLED EVERYTHING TO A HAULT,
i WAS UNSURE AND ASKED YOU WAS IT MY FAULT,
iN EXPLANATION FOR YOUR ACTIONS,
yOU CALMLY BROKE IT DOWN INTO FRACTIONS,
tHIS ISN'T THE RIGHT THING TO DO,
tO MANY OTHER PEOPLE ARE ALSO INVOLVED WITH ME AND YOU,
i LOOK AT YOU AND I EXSPRESSED MY HATE,
i KISSED YOU ONCE MORE AND I KNEW THAT THIS WAS FATE,
yOU KNOW WHY I BROUGHT YOU UP HERE,
yOU STARED AT ME WITH HOPE AND ALSO FEAR,
i WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I DO LOVE YOU,
aLSO THAT WHAT IF THEY DON'T CARE FOR ABOUT ME AND YOU,
wE COULD BE TOGETHER,
wHO KNOWS MAYBE EVEN FOREVER,
yOU REASURED ME WITH A BIG SMACK AND A BIFF,
jUST WHAT IF...



All i ask in life is a beautiful woman to love, and a little sip of faygo too... MCL

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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-02-03 02:56 PM


Your last post? Should not have used all caps..makes it hard to read.  
Wesley the Blue
Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
2 posted 2001-02-04 02:33 AM


Tis a pitty this your last post be
You just arrived but I've had time to see
Such potential in your paining with words
Wish you'd hang with us geeks and nerds

But do what you feel you must
Its your heart you have to trust
I wish you well on your journey
And try not to ever end up on a gourney (I didnt know what to write there)

Keith

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

Mr. Nice112
Junior Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 26

3 posted 2001-02-04 10:33 PM


poet devine- i also agree i see what u r saying.. thank u!!
wesley the blue- thank u for tryin and i have been around for a year or so , my other name was niiiccee311 ..  thank u!!


All i ask in life is a beautiful woman to love, and a little sip of faygo too... MCL

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
4 posted 2001-02-05 12:11 PM


I wish you luck.   Come back once and a while though, won't you?

Joy
                  

What's there to say? Sometimes, plenty

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
5 posted 2001-02-05 04:16 PM


Mr. Nice....
Had to stop and say good-bye....sorry to see you go.....Hope you will come back and see us now and then......and keep writing.

Best
(I remember niiiccee311.....I was bstgirl911)

Mr. Nice112
Junior Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 26

6 posted 2001-02-05 05:50 PM


   I am suprised bestgirl911, suprised that u remebered who i was, i been around for 2 years and been reading your poems for 2 years, thank you ...

All i ask in life is a beautiful woman to love, and a little sip of faygo too... MCL

Moon Dust
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
7 posted 2001-02-05 07:26 PM


I dont really know you but bye anyway

~Maria~


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