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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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Tired of winter? Need a break? Try this. ____________________________________________________ carousel spins a blaring pipe organ tune carnival night- a thousand mirrors glint cotton candy softly pink melts at the touch sawdust in the shoes balls fly everywhere- win the cupie doll walk hand in hand warm breezes cool the skin- moist from summer heat the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost [This message has been edited by pegasus111 (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ah, Pegasus; This did the trick of warming my heart this winters morn.. Lovely! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
The image is super and festive... except for the cotton candy (too sweet now that I'm older). Melton |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
ooohhh, cotten candy...the festive mood is wonderful, feels like i'm there! WO Note: You might want to look at all those -ing endings you have there. -your Haiku master  |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I got dat "ing" on duh brain Lady..thanks for the reminder...  Better?the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost [This message has been edited by pegasus111 (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Hey, beauiful best part of summer that is When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Thanks for the nice reminder of warmer days. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I liked it very much!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm ready!! |
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