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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
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0 posted 2001-01-31 11:03 PM


O FUTON!!! How I love Thee!
How I cherish You inside,
Your beauty comes from function,
and clever, cunning design.

As I lounge upon Your mattress
Upholstery neath my skin,
I slip to dreams of majesty,
as my slumber now begins.

A raft, no flying carpet,
A shelter from the rain,
Each image in my mind of You,
A stage where visions play.

O Yes! I love You Futon!
In furnishings, You are Queen!
Fair cushions Your handmaidens,
A Goddess with nice seams!

" You wrote THAT?? About our futon?"
My dear wife asks of me,
I smile at her and dream again....

of a TV....GIANT SCREENED!!!!!

(( hey everyone....we got a new futon...just fyi  *LOL*  Sol ))


~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~

Author Unknown..well at least to me..:)

© Copyright 2001 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2001-01-31 11:47 PM


                                

Well, I guess we all write about what we love.    Enjoy!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2001-02-01 07:09 AM


and I thought I was weird for having a thing for my recliner...lol..great stuff Sol.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

3 posted 2001-02-02 08:03 AM


*LOL* of all the posts to have start in the new forums......*LOL*

Oh well HEY EVERYONE!!!! Join the " People For Poerty And Futons (( the PFPAF ))
movement...save a poet!!

* smooches to you all *


Sol


~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~

Author Unknown..well at least to me..:)

Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2001-02-03 01:40 PM


Nicely done SOL! hahaha. A wonderful read as always!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
5 posted 2001-02-07 02:19 PM


Sol...

All I can say is....you have to be comfortable....right?

        

Best

wordancer
Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
6 posted 2001-02-07 08:32 PM


oh my gosh...lol...grin!


nicolette
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42
St. Paul, Minnesota
7 posted 2001-02-07 09:02 PM


I feel the exact same way about my futon!!  Nice poem.
laryalee
Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352
Alberta, Canada
8 posted 2001-02-07 11:22 PM


How great to end my day with with this hilarious tribute!  Can't get over "A goddess with nice seams!"  ROFL!
And to top it off, I thought your signature had something to do with the Futons.....you ARE THEIR LEADER!!
Thank you so much!
Lary
P.S. Have you thought of sending this to the Futon builders???

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
9 posted 2001-02-08 07:32 PM


This is great. I remember I wanted a futon but my parents never got me one. It's okay though. I like my comfy mattress!  

Joy

Our doubts are traitors,
And make us loose the good we oft might win
By fearing to attempt.
~Shakespeare

Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
10 posted 2001-02-08 08:05 PM


Oh  My goodness how this made me laugh.
I wish i had nice seams lol  

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