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A Taste Of Hope - Senryu

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-01-31 08:05 AM

Today in winter
It warmed a bit and Spring came
A moment of hope

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A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15

Posts 299
Virginia, USA

1 posted 2001-01-31 10:45 AM

Yay! Let winter end!!! Great piece, gotta feeling of change, its getting better!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-31 12:49 PM

Beautiful!
Let's pray that the Spring brings us joy!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

3 posted 2001-01-31 01:16 PM

'A moment of hope' (I like that)...There was a day of Spring here last week. The sun was shining and it was 40 degrees. (hey that is warm) Now we just had an ice storm so I guess we'll have to wait for the real thing.

Joy

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

4 posted 2001-01-31 11:01 PM

Ellie, this is lovely, and profound. Life is like that, isn't it? When things are darkest and coldest, just when you lose hope, there is a little glimpse of better things to come. Spring IS on the way. hugs

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

5 posted 2001-02-01 07:11 AM

Hmmmm..79 here today..lol... nice piece anyway.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

6 posted 2001-02-02 08:29 PM

beauiful to watch the transfomation into spring, as this senryu does all that.

~Maria~

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