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Koon Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43Singapore |
Why did I look at you Even when I know It means nothing to you? Why did I call your name Even when I know Your feelings are still the same? Why did I touch your face Even when I know I'd be falling from grace? Why did I fall in love with you Even when I know I can never be with you? I want to share All your joys and sorrows But you will never care 'cause I'm just a little sparrow We live in different worlds But I still refuse to see You and I can never be together We were never meant to be. -Koon |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
I can relate to the questions you ask. Perhaps we all have a morbid desire for the unattainable at times. Great work! Simple words from a simple guy |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
beautifully written and poignantly sad. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Don't we always want most what we can't have ? I know, I'm an expert in that area  Liked this a lot ! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad and beautiful! Well done, Koon!  Denise |
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Koon Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43Singapore |
Thanx for the comments....I am glad that you liked it Koon- |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
We begin life crying, we end life by dying, in between it becomes what ever we have the courage to make it bill |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
So sad. So much in life that we desire seems as if it's not meant to be, but there really is so much else to be had that can heal the wounds. Beautiful poem. Sheila |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Yes, it's sad...and the cold reality that sometimes exists is a barrier between something great that could happen. Now I have a reasonable idea as to where my stories of fantasy come from! Thanks for the read, Koon, wish you'd post more often in the Pub!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Koon Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43Singapore |
How can I live when my heart is beating in someone else's hands... Koon- |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i can relate in a different way. i gave my love to one knowing he couldn't love me back the way i needed him too. and stayed knowing he would never change. one day i realized i couldn't do it any more. you live by taking your heart back into your hands and protecting it till the one who deserves it comes asking to have it. a great poem. |
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Koon Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 43Singapore |
Thanx for your kind words. I'm honoured that someone out there likes it. Koon- |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
good job koon I suppose we all want what we don't have ... but how do you know you really can't have it until you try? ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sad write but pretty |
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