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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-01-29 07:22 PM


Dusty sparkle stars,
Rippling along crystal,
Mirroring night sky.


When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.


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kcsgrandma
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1 posted 2001-01-30 12:23 PM


I like this, Maria!  I grew up surrounded by lakes.  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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2 posted 2001-01-30 02:25 AM


you have painted a piece of rural beauty Maria..well done.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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3 posted 2001-01-30 08:12 AM


This is beautiful, Maria

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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4 posted 2001-01-30 12:49 PM


Very beautiful picture you've painted. I liked it very much.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

JOY 14
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5 posted 2001-01-30 02:32 PM


Dusty sparkle stars...mmm. lovley relaxing image, Maria.

Joy

2dalimit
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6 posted 2001-01-31 07:42 AM


Aw. Such a pleasant image.
Thanks for the view.
Melton

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7 posted 2001-02-01 06:30 PM


Beautifully put.  Stars and lakes, together at once... a wonderful combination.  great job.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
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*Cassandra Roseen*


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8 posted 2001-02-02 01:58 AM



This is absolutely gorgeous, what a description!  

Take care,
Melissa~

Moon Dust
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9 posted 2001-02-02 07:47 PM


awww thanks guys

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.


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10 posted 2001-02-27 09:43 PM


I like this!

May we include this in the next issue of Digital Passions?

Greeneyes617
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11 posted 2001-02-28 12:20 PM


Great job.
jbaker
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12 posted 2001-02-28 07:51 AM


I close my eyes and imagine this...so nice!

JB

BloomingRose
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13 posted 2001-02-28 08:18 AM


Oh how pretty!
Brings back memories of times I have been on a lake at night in a boat and looked into the lovely heavens mirrored on the water.
Just beautiful.
Deb

Moon Dust
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14 posted 2001-02-28 06:07 PM


Temptress - Of course you can

Everybody - Thanks, just remeber that beauty is all around you in nature

~FKA Maria Byrne~


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15 posted 2001-03-02 08:53 PM


well said..well documented...and esp liked your first line
Moon Dust
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16 posted 2001-03-07 05:35 PM


Thank u means a lot

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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