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KimW
Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA

0 posted 2000-03-04 01:05 AM

Lightly whispering in her mind
(The poetic Inner voice sings)
It’s soft caressing voice
can be heard lightly
appearing out of the darkness;
falling among the trees.

As she, the poet
bares her soul
With rhythm and melody
painting upon her
tarnished white canvas.
A paper moon illumination
settles in as darkness falls.

Voice and vision provoke thought
By the rhyme left in blotted-
ink traces.

Chimes sing tinkle, ting
in gently spoken response
to a light breeze.
Harmony soars
inside her mind
(In pure oblivion)

She sits mysteriously held
in her silent realm.
(Fervent strokes
calligraphy spoke)

Wooden deck creaks
with every rock
of an old chair
while body language;
words move in reaction
to the thoughts
flying from fevered hand

Nothing exists
but nature and a woman
transfixed in time.
Her lyrics beg to be sung.

Dusk becomes dawn
Silently she stretches in perfect
contentment; spent.
Her words have been sung.
In eloquent grace she has left
a trace by the pen.

KdW, Copyright 2/29/00

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-04 01:14 AM

Welcome to Passions, Kim! This is breathtakinly beautiful! Very lovely! I look forward to reading more from you! Please check you email for a special welcome!

Denise

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

2 posted 2000-03-04 01:45 AM

Kim,

Your poem is full of haiku. That's a good thing, BTW.

Here's a good example:

Chimes sing tinkle, ting
in gently spoken response
to a light breeze.

Great stuff...
~Gene

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2000-03-04 02:47 AM

Wow - this poem invokes passion and poetic artistry. A beautiful combination. welcome to Passions. Can't wait to see more from you.

Michael

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

4 posted 2000-03-04 09:12 AM

Absolutely beautiful. Vivid in it's description. A picture unfolding gracefully as the reader is gently lead with your words.

"words move in reaction
to the thoughts
flying from fevered hand."

I too look forward to reading more of your work.

KimW
Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA

5 posted 2000-03-04 12:41 PM

Thank you for the warm welcome and replies!
(It is very nice to feel welcome)
I look forward to reading everyone's writing in the Forum. What I have read so far is Impressive and shows alot of talent.

Kim

Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

6 posted 2000-03-04 10:47 PM

Like Denise said, breathtakingly beautiful...couldn't have put it into better words myself! Great job, Kim!

Hope to see more of this stuff!

Oh yeah, I almost forgot...welcome to the Pub!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

KimW
Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA

7 posted 2000-03-05 03:41 PM

Thank you for your welcome (and the talent in which you showed with it. Your writing is Incredible and I am looking forward to reading more of yours.
I challenged myself with Lyric's Soul to reach a new depth with my writing and I am very pleased with the outcome and the affect that it has on the reader.

Kim

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