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msjenny
New Member

since 2000-12-08

Posts 2

0 posted 2001-01-28 11:15 PM

Tell me you remember.....
How we walked the beach
for hours hoping the road
would never end.

Tell me you remember.....
The way we held hands as
we felt the water flowing
through our feets.

Tell me you remember.....
How we would talk and gaze
out at the stars, as we felt
the thrill on our hearts.

Tell me you remember.....
How we wished the night
would go on forever as we
grasped every second.

Tell me you remember.....
When we touched how the
warmth just flowed through
our vains.

Tell me you remember.....
With just a glance I
would wilt like a delicate
flower and quiver with
every touch.

Tell me you remember....
How I would shiver with
just a sweet gentle sound
of your voice.

Tell me you remember.....
CAUSE GOD KNOWS I DO !!!

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

1 posted 2001-01-28 11:42 PM

Welcome to the Pub! This sounds pretty unforgettable to me.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

2 posted 2001-01-29 01:25 AM

Very beauiful and romantic piece. Somethings we never forget.

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

3 posted 2001-01-29 08:45 AM

Welcome.
Sounds like your memories will hold your love forever.
Melton

mystic requiem
Member

since 2001-01-26

Posts 144

4 posted 2001-01-29 08:50 AM

Simply wonderful!
I enjoyed the touch of humor at the end.
*thanx*

mYsTiC

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

5 posted 2001-01-29 12:02 PM

well, msjenny, Welcome to the PUB! Wonderful first post... A great way to join our world of never ending poetry! Can't wait to see more!
Alicia A. Renzelman

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

6 posted 2001-01-29 04:25 PM

very nice first post..welcome to passions..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

7 posted 2001-01-29 04:47 PM

Wonderful poem. Those are things definately not to forget. great job, welcome to passions.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

8 posted 2001-01-29 05:42 PM

Thanks for sharing, I like this one

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2001-01-29 05:42 PM

MsJ, this aslo sound very unforgettable to me, such romance could not be forgotten.

beautiful poem

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Mr. Nice112
Junior Member

since 2001-01-27

Posts 26

10 posted 2001-01-30 12:03 PM

I must say that was crazy... i loved how u crashed every lil thing u did... ( one thing, just wondering maybe in the first part instead of "road" maybe put "sand"..
I loved it though

Mr. Nice112
Junior Member

since 2001-01-27

Posts 26

11 posted 2001-01-30 12:03 PM

I must say that was crazy... i loved how u crashed every lil thing u did... ( one thing, just wondering maybe in the first part instead of "road" maybe put "sand"..
I loved it though

All i ask in life is a beautiful woman to love, and a little sip of faygo too... MCL

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

12 posted 2001-01-30 10:22 PM

Welcome to The Pub, msjenny! Very nice!

Denise

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