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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Winter winds prevail, And given up any hope, Look a butterfly. When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well penned!  Yes, butterflies do inspire hope, don't they? They are just so beautiful, as is this haiku~Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is a good message, Maria. Just when you are about to give up hope, hang on! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was really beautiful. The sight of change......nice.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Very nice, Maria--two haiku in one. Normally, the word "winter" would imply a winter haiku, but the reference to the butterfly also makes it a spring haiku and conveyed the thought beautifully. Well done Gene |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Maria! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very nice and u_gene's reply made me appreciate this better... |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks all and thanks for making me see this Haiku in more than one way When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it. |
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