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Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2001-01-20 10:13 AM

Sun first kissed spring morn,
Sweet melody filled the skies,
Welcomed by song bird.

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

1 posted 2001-01-20 10:28 AM

How warm and pretty, Maria! It reminds me of some of my favorite things about spring, and gives me hope it will come again.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

William P Bussey
Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 188

2 posted 2001-01-20 03:16 PM

Maria, spring has always meant new hope to me, it seems we all take heart in a new beginning, shot lines that convey so very much meaning. very nice.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2001-01-20 04:59 PM

Oh beautiful this is! Beautiful!

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

4 posted 2001-01-20 08:35 PM

KCS- thank u, Hey its onlyjust around the corner, nealy

William- Yeah, I agree with you there, thanks.

Munda - Thnak u for replying

Life has got to chnage,
Nothing stays the same,
Soon it will be time,
For me to move on.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2001-01-21 05:19 PM

This is lovely, Maria! Very nice!

Denise

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-01-21 09:21 PM

A wonderful haiku with great imagery!

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

7 posted 2001-01-22 12:32 PM

Maria,
This is beautiful! Short, but very sweet--a perfect example of a well-written Haiku. I liked it a lot.

Gene

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

8 posted 2001-01-22 03:32 PM

very nice, Maria

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

9 posted 2001-01-22 07:30 PM

Thanks all

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

10 posted 2001-01-22 10:17 PM

Just had to fly in here and say I enjoyed this.

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