Broken Winged Angel - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Watcher
New Member

since 2000-11-23

Posts 3

0 posted 2001-01-18 09:39 PM

There used to be a time
When she smiled sweet
No matter what the night
Or day seemed to bring
She used to laugh a lot
To keep away the tears
To others joy she brought
And helped to calm their fears
But now the smiles broken
Like the angels wings
Her voice is softer spoken
And nightmares are her dreams
She doesn't reach so far
Or walk with head held high
Forgets the twinkling stars
While alone at night
Her friends are simple shadows
Ghosts upon the walls
Memories haunt whenever she goes
Walking down lonely halls
Her eyes are filled with sadness
And wisdom beyond her years
To see this lovely lady
Makes my eyes fill up with tears
The bounce is gone from her step
Her face is paler than before
Others saw her and they wept
For their part in breaking her
If I could make one wish
And have it become true
I wish for you to find bliss
Recieve the happiness that you're due
I'll disappear again
Let you live your life
But you're always in my prayers
And I'm here for you any time
All of us apologize
For our parts in hurting you
The words may sound empty now
But remember they ring with truth.

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

1 posted 2001-01-18 10:48 PM

Thanks for the poem...it was nicely written. BWA.

< !signature-->

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

[This message has been edited by Broken_Winged_Angel (edited 01-18-2001).]

Swamp¤Faeryie
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

2 posted 2001-01-18 10:52 PM

i really really liked this.it was well written,i have seen this happen so many times!!

swamp

Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

3 posted 2001-01-22 04:57 PM

Watcher:

I'm sooo sorry to hear about this. She sounded like a lovley, amazing woman. I hope that you and the others whom caused her pain(for whatever reason it might be)can help her back to her old self. Its such a shame to see this happen. Good luck. Great poem!! Made me cry.

~Lisa~

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

4 posted 2001-01-22 04:58 PM

Hey! Forgot to tell you I liked your quote to.

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2001-01-22 08:28 PM

Sad and beauiful. And BWA hope every thing is ok

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

6 posted 2001-01-22 08:30 PM

Sad and beauiful. And BWA hope every thing is ok

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

7 posted 2001-01-22 08:40 PM

Sadness so sweetly and lovenly expressed. My prayers are with you and her.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.