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bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

0 posted 2001-01-17 02:49 PM


Have you ever had that friend?
You know the one.
The one who can look in your eyes,
And know that something is wrong,
Although, you won't admit it,
Even when you're wearing your best,
"Nothings wrong", smile.
The one who will pry just enough,
When you want them to,
But, will stand back in the shadows,
When you need to be alone.
And won't say a word when you beg,
Desperately for advice,
Then do exactly the opposite.

Have you ever had that friend?
You know the one.
The one who wouldn't trade you,
For anything in the world.
The one who loves you for you,
The one who sits and listens,
To the same story 10 times,
And still doesn't say a word,
Just pretends like it's the first time?
The one who will ask you how you are,
Then will wait patiently while you answer,
Even if it's a 20 minute story,
You could have told in 2 minutes,
Without all the embellishments.

Have you ever had that friend?
You know the one.

I know the one........




[This message has been edited by bestgirl911 (edited 01-17-2001).]

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Solstice Son
Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

1 posted 2001-01-17 04:08 PM


Great poem best!*hugs*

and so true!!!!

Sol

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2001-01-17 04:16 PM


yes..once..and I miss him as much now as the day I buried him in that small rural town so many years past...you have razed a spector of much happier days, Bestgirl..the memories run deep..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
3 posted 2001-01-17 04:54 PM


yes, I know the one.  Excelent work.

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
4 posted 2001-01-17 04:54 PM


Sol....
Thanks hun!(((hugs)))

Pegasus....
My heart ached reading your reply....I too have buried a friend...sorry to stir such sad memories for you....(((hugs))))

Best

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
5 posted 2001-01-17 04:56 PM


Wesley...

You snuck in there on me. Thank you.

Best

Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
6 posted 2001-01-17 06:47 PM


Best,
This is a great poem everyone can relate to.  

~Gene

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
7 posted 2001-01-17 07:27 PM


Best, I do know the one, and thank God every day for friends such as these. You said this perfectly!   ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
8 posted 2001-01-18 12:53 PM


Oh yes, Best!  what a treasure such a friend is!  You have written beautifully of friendship.    I hope "the one" recognizes him/herself in this.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
9 posted 2001-01-18 08:51 AM


Gene....
Thank you so much for the kind comments. I have so enjoyed seeing you in the pub...you are a talented addition to our unique family..

Ellie...&...KC....
I reverted from my usuall form in this one and much to my surprise it was fun & I have had a warm reception. As always you both have such sweet things to say and you make my being here that much more enjoyable. Thank you.

Ranea

Romy
Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
10 posted 2001-01-19 10:43 AM


Bestgirl this is wonderful!
And yes, I do know the one and I would love to send her this poem if you don't mind!

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
11 posted 2001-01-19 12:35 PM


Debbie...

I am honored that you like it enough to share with your friend...Thank you.

Ranea

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
12 posted 2001-01-20 05:13 PM


Beautiful poem.  Friends like that are hard to come by for some,b ut well worth the effort.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
13 posted 2001-01-22 02:17 PM


Dawn...

I have been fortunate enough to have 2 such friends in my life, I lost one, and I still torture the other with my silly stories...Thank you for the kind reply.

Ranea

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