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blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2001-01-15 12:09 PM


It's right
To hold me
Awfully tight

It's right
To hold me
All through the night

It's right
To smile
When it's not OK

It's right
To smile
When in dismay

It's right
To be there
When the world is ours

It's right
To be there
In midnight hours

It's right
To say it
"I love you too"

It's right
To say it
When it is true

It's right
To stay here
Every night

It's right
To stay here
I knew you might

It's right
To hold me
Awfully tight

It's right
To hold me
All through the night


Just for you u_gene!  Sorry, I guess I tend to stick to more melancholy forms of writing, huh?  
Alicia A. Renzelman
"Sometimes, there is no darker place than our thoughts; the moonless midnight of the mind." -D.K.  Fear Nothing

© Copyright 2001 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
1 posted 2001-01-15 02:03 PM


Ah, I like this much better, Alicia... and just for me? Woohoo!  

~Gene

pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2001-01-16 05:04 PM


ahhh....warm feelings do fend off the chill don't they?...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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